

FMA Fanfic "Worth Living" 1Summary: Greed manages to survive his battle with Ed and how the rest of the FMA story gets messed up from there.FMA Fanfic "Worth Living" 1
Chapter 1:
There were two things in life that Greed absolutely could not stand. One was being penniless, the other was being powerless. And now he was both.
In a roundabout way, he could blame Martel. If it hadn't been for her, he would have been dead by now. Well, he couldn't totally blame her, she was just trying to return his favor, after all. It was just that she didn't understand that his continuing to live was no longer a favor. He wouldn't have gone back to that witch


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Self-Insertion Nightmare"You just had to ask those weird cosplayers to come home with us," Rowan muttered.Self-Insertion Nightmare
Katrina shrugged her shoulders. "They had nowhere else to go," she replied. "Besides, how was I supposed to know they were the real deal?"
"I don't know. Maybe Sailor Neptune's transformation should've given you a clue?"
Katrina sighed. She couldn't really argue with her best friend's logic there. Sure, most people thought that bringing home their favorite anime characters would be a dream come true, but as the two girls had already discovered, it was a disaster waiting to happen.
A small dining room table was

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